Wednesday, 27 May 2015

Published Writing


The Spooky Zip!

I heard people saying, "Wow!" They were all yelling like mad. I saw people looking and wondering. I felt the wow factor going around in my head. Suddenly I saw the zip slowly open and I saw 50 goblins jump out. I wondered if the goblins were nice goblins. Next I saw 50 more goblins jump out. I felt a bit afraid because they were coming towards me. I wondered if they were after me. The goblins were green and they had black eyes that looked like ash. Next I felt the cold creep up my body. I slyly crept up behind a tree so no one could see me.
By Ella Bella

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